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Monday, November 2, 2020

Notes on the Poem 'God's Grandeur': The Italian/Petrarchan Sonnet

 


This is a
 sonnet and specifically an Italian/Petrarchan Sonnet. This type of sonnet has:

•an Octave (eight lines) and Sestet (six lines)

•Presents some contrast of setting/theme (For example darkness vs. light) 

•Transition occurs in the 9th line

God’s Grandeur

By Gerard Manley Hopkins (U.K. 1844-89)

The world is charged with the grandeur of God.
It will flame out, like shining from shook foil;
It gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil
Crushed. Why do men then not reck his rod?
Generations have trod, have trod, have trod;
And all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared with toil;
And wears man’s smudge and shares man’s smell: the soil
Is bare now, nor can foot feel, being shod.
And for all this, nature is never spent;
There lives the dearest freshness deep down things;
And though the last lights off the black West went
Oh, morning, at the brown brink eastward, springs –
Because the Holy Ghost over the bent
World broods with warm breast and with ah! Bright wings.

Poetry Analysis: God’s Grandeur

Themes: Nature and Religion.

The poet asserts that the grandeur (splendor or greatness) of God is shown in the dependability of nature, in spite of mankind’s insensitivity towards and disconnect from nature. But the poem also indicates two aspects of that grandeur: power, with its authority, and love, with its compassion.

This poem follows the rhyming pattern of the Italian (or Petrarchan) sonnet, with an octave rhymed abbaabba and a sestet rhymed cdcdcd. He effectively uses this type of poetry to make a statement or draw a contrast between man’s neglect of nature (octave) and nature’s ability to replenish herself (sestet). The poet also makes effective use of alliteration, internal rhyme, and unusual imagery.

Although the language is somewhat complicated, the tone of the poem is didactic (intended to instruct). In the octave, we are being addressed by someone who begins with an assertion about God. He explains himself with similes (lines 2-3), and poses a question about man’s disobedience in line 4) supported by evidence in lines 5-8). In the sestet, he reassures his audience that his first statement remains valid, with exclamations such as ‘Oh’ and ‘ah!” adding to the realism of the lesson.

The poem is expressive of God’s presence in the natural world even through man’s exploits

have served to destroy nature and its freshness and purity. To the poet God’s grandeur is

ever pervasive, revealing itself like ‘flame from shook foil’. The word ‘flame’ is significant

as it conveys the brilliance of God as the shining light that foil gives off.

The poet employs the image of an electric charge, which develops into a flame or a light

suggesting the power of his greatness.

God’s light assumes a richness like the ‘ooze of oil crushed’ or pressed to its finest quality.

As the oil gathers strength to richness so does God’s greatness. The images are all interwoven and expanded to express the grandeur of God. In stanza 2, though man is aware of God’s greatness he still exploits through commence and industrialization, blemishing the earth and destroying the freshness of nature.

The repetition,  “generations have trod, have trod, have trod” conveys man’s persistence in his ruthless exploitation. The persistent repetition of words ‘have trod’ leading to ‘smeared and bleared, tells of the poet’s resentment or disgust at man’s actions. ‘Man’s smudge’ and ‘smell’ are expressive of a polluted and squalid environment, all due to man’s uncaring attitude. Unthinking man cares not about the destruction he leaves; he seems not aware of what he has done to nature as is expressed in the words ‘nor can food feel,’ being shod.’

The language of stanza one, lines 5-8, reveals not only disgust but a protest against man’s

ruthlessness. The poet reacts to man’s inhumanity and indignity with reasoned calmness,

a protest without rage or anger for he is consoled by nature’s presence as described in

stanza two (2).

In stanza two (2), the poet tells that God’s presence or power through nature is renewable

or invigorating inspite of man’s destruction. Nature is described as indestructible or

inexhaustible:

For all this, nature is never spent

There lives a dearest freshness deep down things.

The poem ends on a positive note, an assurance that springs from the poet’s faith as he

is convinced of the Holy Ghost’s presence with vitality and life and all that is luminous,”

“warm breaths and bright wings” .


Notes on the Poem 'Le Loupgarou': Italian or Petrarchan Sonnet

 
 
This is a sonnet and specifically an Italian/Petrarchan Sonnet. This type of sonnet has:

•an Octave (eight lines) and Sestet (six lines)

•Presents some contrast of setting/theme (For example sunset vs. night)

         •Transition occurs in the 9th line

Themes: Supernatural and Gender

 

 Le Loupgarou

A curious tale that threaded through the town
Through greying women sewing under eaves,
Was how his greed had brought ole Le Brun down,
Greeted by slowly shutting jalousies
When he approached them in white-linen suit,
Pink glasses, cork hat, and tap-tapping cane,
A dying man licensed to sell sick fruit,
Ruined by fiends with whom he’d made a bargain.
It seems one night, these Christian witches said,
He changed himself to an Alsatian hound,
A slavering lycanthrope hot on a scent,
But his own watchman dealt the thing a wound
Which howled and lugged its entrails, trailing wet
With blood back to its doorstep, almost dead.

Monday, January 6, 2014

Notes on the Poem 'The Lynching': Italian or Petrarchan Sonnet

Themes: Race & Gender, Death, Hatred

The poet indicates that a man has been cruelly hanged and burnt at night, then describes the unpitying crowds that come in the morning to look at the spectacle.

This is a sonnet and specifically an Italian/Petrarchan Sonnet. This type of sonnet has:

•an Octave (eight lines) and Sestet (six lines)

•Presents some contrast of setting/theme (For example night vs. day)

•Transition occurs in the 9th line

The poem 'The Lynching' has 14 lines, 10 syllables per line) with the rhyme scheme abba cddc (octave) effe gg (sestet). Contrast may be found between the octave (for e.g pity, night) and the sestet (for e,g no pity, day). 

Religious references (Allusions) may be found to things like the Nativity scene in the Bible, the Crucifixion and the curse of Ham (and his well-known link to African people). Other aspects of style to be noted include contrast, descriptive detail and symbolism.

Themes such as racism, violence, cruelty, for example for children, pity, injustice and sacrifice underline the outrage felt by the poet at the racist cruelty being perpetuated in parts of the USA in the early 20th century.


                         The Lynching
His spirit in smoke ascended to high heaven.
His father, by the cruelest way of pain,
Had bidden him to his bosom once again;
The awful sin remained still unforgiven.
All night a bright and solitary star
(Perchance the one that ever guided him,
Yet gave him up at last to Fate’s wild whim)
Hung pitifully o’er the swinging char.
Day dawned, and soon the mixed crowds came to view
The ghastly body swaying in the sun:
The women thronged to look, but never a one
Showed sorrow in her eyes of steely blue;
And little lads, lynchers that were to be,
Danced around the dreadful thing in fiendish glee.
                  


                    

Types of Poetry

Types of Poetry
1.      Acrostic
A poem in which certain letters of the lines, usually the first letters, form a word or message relating to the subject:
Curled up in a corner
At peace
Taking a nap

2.      Ballad
A poem that tells a story, usually about a hero that can be passed down through generations.  Most are suitable for singing.
La Belle Dame Sans Merci by Keats, as shown on Bob's Byway Glossary of Poetic Terms Site

3.      Blank Verse
Unrhymed lines of iambic pentameter
The qua / lity / of mer / cy is / not strain'd,
It drop / peth as / the gen / tle rain / from heaven
Upon / the place / beneath; / it is / twice blessed:
It bles / seth him / that gives / and him / that takes;
From the Merchant of Venice, Shakespeare 

4.      Cinquain
5 lined unrhyming poem (1-2-3-4-1)- 1 word on the top row, 2 on the second, 3 on the third, 4 on the fourth and one on the last- another version is in form of syllabic meter- two syllables on the first line, four on the second, six on the third and two on the last.

Sun
Bright shining
Orb of gold
Warming the whole world
Star
5.      Diamante
7 lined unrhyming poem (1-2-3-4-3-2-1)- 1 word on the top line, 2 adjectives describing the first word on the second line, 3 words ending in "ing" about the first word on the third line, 4 words on the fourth line: 2 about the first word and 2 about the very last word, 3 words ending in "ing" on the fifth line about the last word, 2 adjectives describing the last word on the sixth row, and a word opposite of the word on the first line on the seventh row
Earth
brown, soft
growing, living, hiding
tunnels, holes, waves, foam
moving, sinking, flooding
blue-green, smooth
Sea
6.      Elegy
This type of poem alternates hexameter and pentameter lines, is usually about the death of someone and has a sad tone :
Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard by Thomas Gray, as shown on Bob's Byway Glossary of Poetic Terms Site

7.      Epic
This is a long narrative poem usually about the adventures and bravery of a hero.
For Example:
The Illiad by Homer, as shown on the Internet Classics Archive

8.      Free Verse
Also called open form poetry, free verse refers to poems characterized by their nonconformity to established patterns of meter, rhyme, and stanza.
For Example:
leaves falling, soaring,
trying to defy gravity, dancing with the wind
short-lived flight

9.      Haiku
This type has three unrhymed lines in a 5-7-5 syllabic meter- the first line has 5 syllables, the second seven, and the last 5.
For Example:
            majestic mountain
                                                                        towering up above me
                                                                        insignificance
10.  Heroic Couplet
This poem has lines of iambic pentameter that rhyme in pairs (aa, bb, cc)
For Example:
          Roses are red
Violets are blue
(you didn't know you were making
 heroic couplets, did you?!)

11.  Limerick
5 lines with a rhyme scheme of (aa, bb, a). The first line explains the situation, the second tells what happened, the third and fourth tell what went wrong, and the fifth tells the significance (the so what?!) These poems were popularized by Edward Lear.
For Example:
There was a young lady of Niger
Who smiled as she rode on a tiger.
  They returned from the ride
  With the lady inside
And the smile on the face of the tiger.
  -- Anonymous

12.  Ode
This is a relatively lengthy lyric poem that often expresses lofty emotions in a dignified style. Odes are characterized by a serious topic, such as truth, art, freedom, justice, or the meaning of life; their tone tends to be formal.
Ode to a Nightingale by John Keats, as shown on Bob's Byway Glossary of Poetic Terms Site

13.  Sonnet
14 lined poem in iambic pentameter that usually deals with love, religion or some other serious concern. The Italian sonnet rhyme scheme is (abbaabba-cdecde-aa or abbaabba-cdccdc-aa). The English (Shakespearian) has 3 quatrains w/ a concluding couplet.

Sonnet XVIII by Shakespeare
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate: Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer's lease hath all too short a date: Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; And every fair from fair sometime declines, By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd; But thy eternal summer shall not fade, Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest, Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st; So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.”

14.  Quatrain
A poem, or part of a poem, with 4 lines; usually rhyming alternately. It is the most common stanzaic form.
Once there was a cat
Being chased by a dog
But they came across a mat
Where there was a log

15.  Villanelle
6 stanzas, 5 three line stanzas, and ending with one four line stanza. There are only two rhymes in the usual villanelle, placed stratgetically in the poem
The House on the Hill by Edwin Robinson, as shown on Bob's Byway Glossary of Poetic Terms Site